There’s nothing greater than finishing the first draft of your novel, and at 2am, as I distinctly remember it, the urge to shout “woohoo!” at the top of your voice prevails, followed by the prompt realisation your house mates are asleep. However, that was two years ago on 30th November. That’s two years of procrastination, two years of reading a novel you feel is a piece of junk, two years of taking your ideas and rethinking them, two years with moments where you question your ability as a writer. And you’re only up to draft 2 of chapter 8, draft 3 of chapter 4 and draft 5 of chapter 1. 
Not exactly a productive two years. But you can’t rush these things, I picked up a book that claimed, “with this method you can have your novel redrafted within a year ready for publication, and only work on it during your weekends.” But that’s not necessarily realistic. However, what I’ve changed has taken a lot of extra planning, which I’ve only really started in the past year, realising it needed to be done.
I am of course talking about my novel, The Delusion Wing (title may change). This year has been a good year for editing, but it’s quite a big overhaul and it’s taking more work than I originally anticipated, but when you’re not happy with something you have to fix it. I’ll flat out and say it, draft 1 is a load of rubbish! Nobody is allowed to read it, ever! I can’t bear to read it myself, but somehow find the strength. The good news is, I’m happier with the new material, there’s a number of changes I had to make, such as setting, plot, atmosphere, description, characters and even technology. It’s a dystopian sci-fi, but instead of looking into the future, as it was originally (I even went as far as coming up with plans to set it on a completely different planet, but the logistics just failed), now it’s a parallel reality to our own. In effect the plot considers the effect of indoctrination on a social level inside of a theocratic society.
There’s a lot of things I could have done: picked an existing religion and country and write a historical piece, but that’s in a way naming names and prevents me from having so much as a creative license. Then there’s setting it in the future, which required inventing a new religion, which was the original plan, but then I sat down thinking, “but there’s 2 billion Christians, 1.5 billion Muslims and so on in the world, how would this ‘new’ religion convert so many people?” One thing certain religious groups fear is atheism and it has been given a bigger voice today, so I thought, “what if the majority of society become atheists and religion becomes unpopular, then certain people end up falling for this new religion”, but it seemed like a stupid idea to me, if atheism was the majority, would there be people who’d seek some kind of faith? Or would it be a social agreement that faith in deities is no longer a viable answer?
My other idea was to think of the colonials, you had Puritans moving away from an ‘immoral’ society to start their own one off and that’s where the planets idea came in. None of those ideas I liked and I didn’t want to be ‘anti-religious’ and what I wanted was for a currently existing religion and culture to be overwritten by a new one, showing the loss of ‘freedom of religion’ (a civil liberty), which was part of my original ideas. Christianity, for example, took over from the pagan religions.
So, what did I settle with? Have it so paganism thrives and have it so the Viking culture is the one that grew - changing the course of History from about 900AD, after all, they became a literate society and were great explorers, so it’s not a ridiculous idea. This means the world as we know it is a very different place, leaving me to start world building. This leaves room for this new religion, which takes symbolism from different religions (sometimes it happens when one culture assimilates another) to win the hearts and minds of the people, as well as strike fear into their heart.
As part of the overhaul, new architecture and new technology and you probably can equate it to the 1920s, just thought of differently. It has also meant I’ve had to think of how their homes would be set out, architecture would be different and I did my research into Viking homes, the idea of having a fire in the middle adapting into the central hearth, which provides heating for the house (or quite literally, a central heating system), but also a stove.
It has worked out to be very interesting and have allowed me to be quite creative, I’ve even created my own sport, called Bjarndyrknot (or bear-ball), which is kind of like rugby and wrestling combined into one sport. I’ve worked hard into thinking about how it’d work and how to making it fun, interesting and a challenge. What I haven’t done and something I want to do, is find a group of 10 volunteers to play the game and I’ll referee. It might even be fun to start up a bearball club. ;) It’d be in the name of research.
Now, I’ve sat down with my wonderful collection of markers to continue editing this piece of junk. Rants may ensue.